#1November 6th, 2009 · 10:03 PM
58 threads / 44 songs
149 posts
United States of America
Im tyred
i cant spell to well so please tell me what you think

I'M TYRED
"refrain"
Im tyred
so tyred
of lookin 4 luuuuuuuuv
im cyrin
so cryin
lookin 4 answers up abooove
oh oh oh
"verse 1"
u dont kno this feelin
dont kno how ima b dealin
with dis pai ai, ai, aint
i swar 2 u aint nothin gonna
cha a a ange
how i feel about
uuuuuuuuuuuuu
oh
"refrain"
"verse 2"
I hope u da best
my heart burns deep with inside my
cheeeeeeest
u will always b special 2 me
i hate dat it had 2 come down 2 b
like
diiiiiiiiiis
oh
"refrain"
"brake"
Im tyred
of cryin
so tyred
of cryin
"repeat"
oooooooooooo
"refrain 2x"
"thought of and writen by: Cpbeats"
#2November 7th, 2009 · 05:43 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
Don't worry about the spelling, that's the great thing about creating your OWN song, you can spell it how you like, so long as everybody understands, it's cool

I'm not a lyric critique, I'm pushing 50 [old git], but it certainly has a modern feel to it, so modern music would probably fit it best. But then again being creative, you can mix old with new, as many modern compositions of today.
#3November 8th, 2009 · 07:28 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Hey beats..Wuz up?
Sorry about not getting back at you.There's some personal stuff I'm working on that has taken most of my time.Pm me your new address so I can go visit you.Hope your doing well..Nice set of lyrics my friend..Yeah some spelling issues here and there but I second Denis on his view!!
Anyways be well we will talk soon!
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