Hey it's OK to post the lyrics on the audio you posted, you can edit the post and include them there too.
I'm a hopless lyric critique, but they flow nice

Well, they are lyrics and this is the lyrics review part of the forums.

But in the future, I think this area is used more for getting your lyrics reviewed before the recording of a song.

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Yeah no problem, it's just more practical to upload them at the same time, and you'll have more chance of getting the lyrics reviewed, simply bacause the audio posts are much more accessed and reviewed.