I ...... I ... I love it! Wow!! Its a totally different prespective that what I am used to writing about or what I have read. Its a nice new spin. I like it!!

Im looking through it trying to highlight a part that I like best, and I can't just pick one part out! Its ALL good. I think that its just fine the way that you wrote it.

Curious: What genre do you like to write for?

I really do like it.

okay i re-read something that I really liked
And now I'm sorry for my lies
And the truths I tried to hide
But my closet skeletons...
now overflow, overflow
And I'm sorry for your tears
Caused by the momentary fears

thats really how parts of life can be. its real. Great job!

-Sarah White

Do you plan to write some music for this?