brick walls and a faded heart beat,
harsh sounds in the cold winter air,
the touch of the one you love,
so sick and defying,
you dont want to be anywhere but here,

because my heart beats fast,
so we take it slow,
we're in the pouring rain but its a long way home,
and we catch our breath,
because we know its not the end,
and the look in your eyes says we cant pretend

we hear the pidder padder of the rain on the side walk,
timing the rhythm of our smiles,
private thoughts and secret meetings,
so no one knows,
but they see the distance in our eyes

my heart beats fast,
so we take it slow,
we're in the pouring rain but oh so far form home,
we stop and catch our breath,
because its not the end,
and the look in your eyes is telling me i cant pretend

but now my visions blurred,
and the suns come out,
because my thoughts are clear,
i'm no longer in the clouds,
and our secrets out

so now my heart beats fast,
and we'll take it slow,
but now the sun's come out and i'm alright at home,
and then we catch our breath,
because we know its the end,
the lookin you're eyes still says we cant pretend


Please read and comment! you would make my life.

lol its a really great song I deffinitally like the first verse

brick walls and a faded heart beat,
harsh sounds in the cold winter air,
the touch of the one you love,
so sick and defying,
you dont want to be anywhere but here,

they are really good!

Hope to to read or hear more from you!

-Sarah White

Thanks Sarah
I'm happy that you like it 

Sounds very interesting. I can't wait to hear you record it. Don't even think about telling me you aren't planning on it! This is one of my favorites!

this is really good and the first verse is my favorite as well!!!

excellent job

also, welcome to the amp kaylee!

aww, thank you very much!!
why does everybody seem to like the first verse?

Maybe everyone's just feeling a bit "emo"?

I didn't have a specific favourite - to me, the song should be emphasized as a whole, meaning that taking out a part would be wayyy out of context... Again, that's my opinion, I don't review song lyrics much (I can never seem to remember any either)...

Nice work, will be looking forward to a possible recording of this in the future.

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