#1November 8th, 2007 · 06:24 PM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
Souls in Shatters pt 2
Ok, I always loved posting lyrics when I was last on here on a regular basis cause I could never upload anything so that's the tactic I'm usicng this time round too.

In a world where justice is nout but a penelty
protecting friends is a felony
to cause anger is their trap
lap, lap it up
another victem to the system
right becomes wrong
and wrong is defined by the thin blue line
time after time
and where is he now with his sirens on
when your lost and broken, and all hope is gone
there he is down the road with two more cars
cause his sixth sense tells him  this lads not far
from that stash that he holds
your in the wrong place pig
look round the corner, the samaritans dead
just beg
that you ignorance holds
cause your mind's too small for these stories of old

Don't be scared, stand up proud
present and apply your wit
the conscience of a nation
gives you no hesitation
we'll carry on, we are free
this is the first hit
while the powers of small masses
build the fire to be lit

What can I say about this world, we're all as stupid as eachother
take a leaf out of her book, take a leaf out of mine
leaving us as lost as we were before this rhyme
its like the blind lead the sighted
but the sighted have been blinded
by the blind so they can't see
the wrongs out there to see
and like a herd without a sheperd
we'll carry on till we're decrepid
fucked, obscured and mashed
our world has turned to ash
your people's hopes are shattered
and what support do we have
no reliance from the weak
but we'll carry them till we creep
though we leave the strong behind
is this wrong defined
or are we left here by the leaders too iresponsible for their post
although to me it seems opaque to most
suprise suprise, these opinion polls show difrant
but there's nothing that I can do
only regret ensues, then ensures our relise
through trying to find a cure I only find briefly, inormality
and an escape from imorality

Don't be scared, stand up proud
present and apply your wit
the conscience of a nation
gives you no hessitation
as we scream "we are free"
this is the first hit
while the powers of small masses
build the fire to be lit
#2November 9th, 2007 · 04:45 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
woah, man, solid stuff! I love the way you fit the rhymes around the words, rather than the words around the rhymes, it make the lyrics sound really intricate and well developed. It's very poetic but the rhyming isn't consistent (which is a good thing imo), which allows it all to tie into place nicely. Very well written, great work man, great work!
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