hey! nice work I love the contrasts that you have put in: reality vs. fantasy aka what you dream of, what you want. Its really good!

the only thing that i can see that needs some work would be the ending

just the last 2 lines though, not the whole thing!

IF it where me, but its not its you so you can take it or leave it

I would put

and the lingering of love's touch
all left behind me
because sometimes dreaming isnt enough

I really do like this song though! hope to see more!

- Sarah White

Oh! and by the way! Welcome to the AMP!

hey glad that you liked it!