-Intro-
(slow tempo with this)
Awake I cry,
the tears stinging my eyes
your face and words linger in my mind
all the nasty things you said
nights we tossed and turned in your bed
for all the good times and the bad
your the only one who has ever had
me----(hold)---
(beat picks up)

-V1-
this pain i feel isnt so bad
since im feeling it for you
its not so bad to hurt like this
its all from what you do

it keeps me alive
and it helps me to breath
knowing that i can feel
even pain, gets me going

(kind of a harder rock pre-chorus and heavy bass and rythm guitar leading up to the main chorus)

(pre-chorus) You keep breaking my heart over and over again
                   and yet I still come back for more---(hold)---
                   AND YOUR NEVER FINISHED WITH ME!

(main chorus)Without true love,
                       you won't know true pain so
                      I get off hearing myself scream
                      this maddness, you're like a disease
                      still pulsing through my veins
-V2-
go ahead hate me
at least you feel something
hate and love are two in the same
passions that burn brilliantly


(pre-chorus) You keep breaking my heart over and over again
                   and yet I still come back for more---(hold)---
                  AND YOUR NEVER FINISHED WITH ME!

(main chorus)Without true love,
                       you won't know true pain so
                       I get off hearing myself scream
                       this maddness, you're like a disease
                       still pulsing through my veins

-V3-
take your sweet time
I wish it would never end
but good things never last
and I think that we're hating to fast

just scream at me
just scream at me
just - scream - at - me----(hold)-

AND DONT BE FINISHED WITH ME!

(heavy bass and rythm guitar)

(main chorus)Without true love,
                       you won't know true pain so
                       I get off hearing myself scream
                       this maddness, you're like a disease
                       still pulsing through my veins

please dont be finished with me.



-a  little about this song-
This song is written from a girls point of view. Its about a one sided relationship. She is in love with him, and he is just in like, which eventually turns to hate. But she thinks to herself that him hating her is better than nothing, so she is making the most of that hate.


 I have been on and off working with this song for about 2 or 3 years now. ALOT of inspiration. Let me know what you think! Personally I think its still kinda rough, I cant put into words the music in my head.

   Thanks!
Sarah White

PRINTING..... I hope you dont mind...
i totally want to mess around with these...
Mrs. White can i say you never cease to amaze...
I've been sorta MIA and the one thing i've missed
the most
is your amazing lyricism!!!

you guys are great.


13FP- The comment on the songwritting career means so much. Its what i am going after, so thank you so much! I thought that with this song i would kinda use () those little things to indicate what the music is doing. And this is the first song I can see myself singing. True story. So thanks so much!

Mr. Sasquatch-
I know seriously you just go off and leave me to amaze the amp all on my own lol.
im printing them off to, then here in a bit Im plugging in my guitar and rippin it up. I want this to stay heavy and rocking. I have to get this recorded. but how?? i have nothing to do that...
Im kinda like (shy) so to speak to write songs with induendos....but then again i have written a ton of them, so after this one i might just write more . Did you really miss my lyricism???

thanks for reading!
Sarah-

WHY YES MRS.WHITE!!!
i did... your words flow...
its inspiring...
i ended up taking it into a different direction..
writing new words..
changing it completely
and i ended up with a song myself haha!!

Sweet action! put your song up! i wanna read it!!
its wierd, summer time, winter and night time usually bring out the best lyrics. You betta put them there lyrics up in that there forum posting site...Ill be a' checkin. lol wow long day.
thank you though im glad that i can inspire somebody

who's doing the music?

i've got an upload ready.......
i'm going to do it over and put it up...
gimme a few hours...
i gotta cut grass first..

TK- Which song are you talking about? mine or Sasquatch??

hey, i really like this song. Good job! my favorite part is, "hate and love are two in the same/passions that burn brilliantly"

hey thanks! and thanks for reading!

no problema!

talking about YOUR lyrics... who's doing the music?

I mean do you already have some music or should someone do that for you?
You wrote

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-Intro-
(slow tempo with this)
>

That suggests an existing music track, does it?

instrumentation?
beat count?
rhythmic?
Lead melody?
Backing track?

ohhh i c! lol No I have done the music for it, I just put those as kind of a guide so that as somebody is reading this they are kinda seeing how it goes.

Would love to hear music to this, Seems you've put a lot into it

 

thanks

did the guide help???