Hey everybody. I know i havent posted on here in a while, because i havent actually written a song in a while.
So here is a song that i wrote today, and i'm very happy with it! So far its got amazing feedback!

Credit to Kayla for the name.
Credit to me for the lyrics.

The Stars Are Safe

How do you shine so bright,
When there’s not a star in the sky,
Everything is black tonight,
And I want to just let go,
But I just need to let you know,
What is going through my mind,
In this second of time

Cause sometimes you got to try,
You can not run and hide,
Because you’ll lose what you’ve got,
In this life,
But I see the stars tonight

So come on lets break the mold,
And I will not let you go,
And we’ll live as the days start to fade,
But we will not grow old
Because our souls are sold

Cause sometimes you got to try,
You can not just run and hide,
Because you’ll lose what you’ve got,
In this life,
But I see the stars tonight

In this life we live it up,
We are weightless and hurtful,
But we are the young



Please tell me what you think!

its pretty good.i like the concept of th song.good stuff for not writing in a while.

Thank you!
i'm glad that you like it 

I like it.  I might want to borrow them if it is ok.

Aw thanks you two.

Actually, Monkey Boy i was wondering if you could help me with the tune.
Hahaha, when i wrote it....its like i wrote it to the tune of a Paramore song, and Secret Valentine by We The Kings....
Mixed together.
Weird, i know.

P.S. RAAAAWWWRRR!!!! 

YAY!!!!!!!!!
rawrr!

I realize now how hard it is to critique others poetry. Word are not easy to come by on either side. Your words tell a story here. Thank you for sharing your words.

Aw, thank you so much!
I'm glad that you liked it