#1October 2nd, 2006 · 08:47 PM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
Broken
I look ay you but can only see myself
I try to hide but its no good to lie
The smell of you surrounds me
I can feel you all around me
Just go away
                                                                    Chorus:
         Leave me be
         Let my soul burn in another hell
         Cause I don't want to be here
         You can't make me stay here
         Stab me through the heart one more time:                     Maybe this time you can take me away
Maybe this time you can finish me off
The thought of you just kills me
The site of you just breaks me
Just go away
 Chorus:
I look at you but can only see blood passing
Which I try to hide but its no good to lie
Shiny blades cut through me
Before the pain will leave me here
Just go away
 Chorus:
#2October 3rd, 2006 · 06:35 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
wow...tragic lyrics.  have music?
#3October 3rd, 2006 · 02:17 PM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
I'm working on it. Starting a band is more work than it seems.
#4October 3rd, 2006 · 02:29 PM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
im glad that you like it
#5October 4th, 2006 · 10:09 AM
2 posts
United States of America
good!
#6October 4th, 2006 · 12:22 PM
6 threads
138 posts
India
i see that the lyrics have a deep meanings to them. i like it the moment i read em. i really wonder what was on you heart n what mood you were in when you composed because there are a lot of people out there who can identify to these words. think you should title the song "just go away" that complies with the mood of the song.

seeing these lyrics in a song would be great........ 

yup starting a band can become nasty at times. you feel things are right but then it all comes crashing down to the floor. keep trying hard though and you will get through

good luck!!!.
#7October 6th, 2006 · 12:38 PM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
Thanks nobster I appreciate the comments.
#8November 16th, 2006 · 03:32 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
You don't know me
You have no clue who I am but I however read your work
before it was published, and I think it is f-ing awesome. I give you four stars because...Fall Into Me gets five.
Keep up your awesome work!
#9November 16th, 2006 · 03:33 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
Hey
Told you to check it!
#10November 29th, 2006 · 03:35 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
Hey
Read it again....
#11December 16th, 2006 · 02:42 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
GOODNESS!
PUT ANOTHER SONG ON HERE!
 
#12January 10th, 2007 · 12:21 PM
9 threads
75 posts
United States of America
Well!
Good Luck! With that!
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