uhm.. hey man..
i think i would maybe redo the chorus/title to this song...
im going to guess you play it soft acoustic with maybe
a build up after the first verse/chorus...
uhmm GREAT idea by the way..
and the verses are nice!! they are well thought out
and they flow like a musical melody should...
but bra, for me the chorus is to much like
Posions - "Every Rose Has It's Thorn"
a very popular song indeed.....
but yea man.. other than that...
GRADE A!! premo man!!
i think i would maybe redo the chorus/title to this song...
im going to guess you play it soft acoustic with maybe
a build up after the first verse/chorus...
uhmm GREAT idea by the way..
and the verses are nice!! they are well thought out
and they flow like a musical melody should...
but bra, for me the chorus is to much like
Posions - "Every Rose Has It's Thorn"
a very popular song indeed.....
but yea man.. other than that...
GRADE A!! premo man!!