#1March 5th, 2009 · 10:17 PM
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165 posts
United States of America
Endless Night
Its another rainny monday evening
to bad the rain isnt outside
gripping my pillow stained in mascara
remembering your green eyes
the music that played on the radio
in the background soft and slow


the moonlight is casting shadows
on this endless night
but they dont quite hold me like you
the sounds of the street
try and lull me to sleep
but they dont quite sound like you
and on this night
all these memories i fight
because it hurts to remember you


trying to wake up from all my dreaming
your face still haunting me there
a sudden new pain ripping right through me
i am stuck in this nightmare
cant do anything besides sit and stare
paralyzing as it burns

Chorus

-Music Break-

I have laid in our room night after night
replaying reliving every fight
it was stupid then, I realize now
you loved me, I just dont know how.

Chorus

Your memories cast shadows
on this endless night
and they dont quite do what you do

  • Well a lot of inspiration for this song, I hear it in my head, and I will not rest until I get it recorded and up on here...looks like I wont be resting for awhile..lol, Its kinda a rough version Im working out some kinks with some of the lyrics but this is the best one yet ( i have tired to write this several times) So let me know what you think!*


-Sarah White





 
#2March 6th, 2009 · 01:10 PM
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Like the way this one flows. It will be easy to add music to imo

Keep it up!!

Denis
#3March 7th, 2009 · 12:26 AM
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165 posts
United States of America
Denis wrote…
Like the way this one flows. It will be easy to add music to imo

Keep it up!!

Denis

This was a sample song using the advice you sent me, with keeping the lines simular, and just reading it outloud it does seem like its going to be easy to add some composition. Thanks for the tip!

Sarah
#4March 7th, 2009 · 04:44 AM
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Fantasy wrote…
Denis wrote…
Like the way this one flows. It will be easy to add music to imo

Keep it up!!

Denis

This was a sample song using the advice you sent me, with keeping the lines simular, and just reading it outloud it does seem like its going to be easy to add some composition. Thanks for the tip!

Sarah

That's great, just need the music now, obvioulsly need a female vox, hmmm... could just imagine me singing about mascara, what would the neighnours think..lol
I've not been doing anything with lyrics for the last week, I'm just playing around with music ideas, practicing etc. It would be nice to see how well this song flows musically, as I'm confident it will.

Keep 'em comin'

Denis
#5March 7th, 2009 · 11:15 PM
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165 posts
United States of America
Thanks! I dont think that you should sing about mascara either lol I really want to record this one, im working with that..I havent forgot your song, im workin out the final kinks and ill have it up before long, my inspiration has smacked me in the face again, so im good to go!

Cheers!
Sarah
#6March 8th, 2009 · 06:00 AM
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United Kingdom
Fantasy wrote…
Thanks! I dont think that you should sing about mascara either lol I really want to record this one, im working with that..I havent forgot your song, im workin out the final kinks and ill have it up before long, my inspiration has smacked me in the face again, so im good to go!

Cheers!
Sarah

Great!!! look forward to hearing it.

Denis
#7March 9th, 2009 · 09:53 PM
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166 posts
United States of America
  are collaboratorally cheating on me ms.white!!!!!

haha jk...

but man I love this song (as if thats no surprise)

i think i love every thing you write...

you just have a way with the words man,,
#8March 10th, 2009 · 07:13 PM
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165 posts
United States of America
lol
no im not cheating HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME AFTER ALL WE HAVE BEEN THROUGH TOGETHER!!
lol HAha! jk

i was up late ( trying to write our collab, as well as the one with Denis) and this song was dancing around in my thoughts just begging me to write it!

thank you, its nice knowing somebody appriciates my work.

Im what do you say...a Word Weaver

LOVES!
Sarah
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