wow i like this song.sorry for whatever you had to go through .but we've all been in that place.

yea thats how life makes us stronger.

I'm sure that if our societys were set up differently we would come to these things in different ways and at different times in our lives.
OK! What doesn't kill you makes you stronger ..... but there are SO many people walking around with some bizarre pre-defined (passed on) ideas of life and death that it 'takes their lives' to come to some scrap of truth.

Anyway....cool piece of poetry , which you've made a song of....
Reading it I really hear a very dynamic song going on (most of your stuff has that dynamic/operatic thing going on!)
I like :
And as the tears come crashing down
on my hands and knees, I strike the ground
I've been screaming your name
but you never came
I think its time I end my pain
. . . with a BANG BANG

but then so do you because you've based the whole song on that piece.

I dont like 'Bang' but I do like 'Bang Bang' though I think it would be (poetically) interesting if you went : BIG BANG !

Big Bang ! Is the sound everybody hears
...

Monkey Boy, i like it.

Everytime it says 'BANG/BANG BANG!' i can just hear it, like somebody banging on a drum really hard as someone else yells it....

i'm not sure why, thats just how i hear it when i read it 

oh, and RAWR a lot