I love this! You need some very cool music to go along with this, and some great singing, a few bleeding guitar solos, and streth this out to about 13 minutes long and this will be so epic people will fall head first into their graves.
but really, you have some awesome lyrics here.
i cant wait to see them in a song.
P.S. right after "But most of all, as I'm staring at the wall's of this dark room" you should scream "I'LL SEE YOU ON THE DARK SIDE...OF THE MOON"
lol
rock on
but really, you have some awesome lyrics here.
i cant wait to see them in a song.
P.S. right after "But most of all, as I'm staring at the wall's of this dark room" you should scream "I'LL SEE YOU ON THE DARK SIDE...OF THE MOON"
lol
rock on
| D@nm! |
this is a great song.. I think that the message is great. We all worry about what we'll leave behind to the ones we love, and the ones that would love to see us fall over in the first place. Wow im really glad i checked out this song today, just reading this kinda turned my day around. Thanks!
btw, have you ever heard Leave Out All The Rest by Linkin Park?? its the same concept. I totally dig it.
and ill be waiting to hear the music for it!
-Sarah White
btw, have you ever heard Leave Out All The Rest by Linkin Park?? its the same concept. I totally dig it.
and ill be waiting to hear the music for it!
-Sarah White
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13thFloorProductions wrote…
Thanks Sarah, I'm glad my song made your dayand yes I have heard the song, it kinda helped in the writing of this one but the inspiration for this song really was a nightmare I had.... I came up with the idea for the song the morning after the nightmare while I was at work
Thanks for your input Sarah, I hope more people will check out the lyrics like you did and tell me what they think of it
i have written some songs based off of nightmares/dreams that i have had, and i think that they are some of the best ones yet.
This is a great song!
| Dude? |
you DON'T suck.
| doggity dog. |
you should try figuring it out, and then send it to me on text!
i would love you foreverrr!
haha i like how you just expect that type of thing from me. And if anything happens between us, for some reason, and we don't see each other for 50 years, and i just run into you on the street you will still be Monkey Boy
i would love you foreverrr!
haha i like how you just expect that type of thing from me. And if anything happens between us, for some reason, and we don't see each other for 50 years, and i just run into you on the street you will still be Monkey Boy