4:07 PM 10/24/2007
11:02 AM 10/25/2007
heres the new song Im working on...I have the Music  but Im having a hard time with getting the proper mix...so stay tuned
let me know what you think...this is one for Paganscradle beautful vocals


What Does It Take

Verse 1
Tell me, Baby
what does it take
to get a lil closer
to you 
I'll give away my favorite car
I'll stop playing my brand new guitar
no more coffee or coffee cakes
I'll stop drinking McDonald's  milkshakes

Chorus:
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take
to get you
to get you
closer to me

Verse 2
I'll forgive all of my enemies
I'll stop dreaming of my favorite dream
Give charity all of my hard earned gold
sell my house
and live out in the cold
I'll stop singing on Bandamp
I'll try, but you know
that I really can't

Chorus:
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take
what does it take
to get closer to you

Instrumental 2 x

Chorus:
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take
what does it take
to get you
closer to me
Instrumental:
(to get closer to you)

Bridge:
(to get you closer to me)

Verse 3
I'll stop singing in the shower
But I wont stop
sending you those pretty flowers
or stop
thinking of you
every day
with every passing hour

Chorus:
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take
what does it take
to get you
closer to me

Pre_End
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take

(pause for chord change)x2

to get you
closer to me
--
End
Just tell me
tell me Baby
what does it take
to get you
closer to me



Lyrics:
Ralph S. Virgilio
5:56 PM 10/24/2007
11:03 AM 10/25/2007

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geeeezzz.......i feel compelled.

anything anyone writes is amazing to me.  i can write music....but the lyrics thingy escapes me.
i've written some.....but...they are kinda cheesy i think.

"i'll stop playing my brand new guitar"

wow.....that must be SOME lady! lol  i stopped playing my guitar for a guy once. 
guy is gone...guitar still here.

good job flyer.  like it.

:O)  mb

Agreed! And she's lucky too, cause like hell I'd stop doing all that for anyone (and I've got a girlfriend before anyone starts taking a poke at me for that one).
I liked these, they made me laugh in places, especielly the bit about bandamp (you kiss ass you).
Anyway, cool lyrics,
KI

Love it Flyer!I can already imagine you guys singing it :]
To me,instant hit!Love the whole Bandamp part.Really cute.
Can't wait to hear it man!
and good luck!
Chy

Pretty fun stuff there!

Hey, nice one Ralph!
Love the BandAmp line XD
It's all great, every last line.
I dunno if you thought of this... but I kinda pictured this as a duet when I read through it. You know how there'd be the guy sing one line, then the girl would take the next and they'd pass between... that's what I'd love to hear.

good idea writersblock....its a gorgeous composition...xxx flyers a good artist all round brilliant musician..xxxx

thanks everyone...heres there song   ...


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