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#1January 2nd, 2009 · 08:33 PM
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A LYRIC FOR THIS IMAGE..please

hOPE THIS HELPS PLEASE.............
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FISH
#2January 2nd, 2009 · 11:49 PM
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Interesting enough...
Thought I would give this a go!

These Satin Sheets v2

I'm holding on
It's the edge of night
and I'm holding on
to black and white
Shades of grey
begin to permeate
Steal my senses
Sound and sight

And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day

The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me

And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day

Let us make believe
That the world
Just isn't there
That the world
Just cannot see
Inside these walls
We are free
Blind of it all

A world of shadows
And you are the light
These satin sheets
Push back the night
Shades of grey
Have gone away
Of black and white
You have your way

And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day




-Mark
#3January 3rd, 2009 · 12:16 AM
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Ok so firstly awesome idea, I saw Hellraiser a little while ago so this was sort of motivated by that. For those unfamiliar, Hellraiser features a mysterious woman who lures unassuming men to her attic to be consumed by her demon-spawn, undead, brother-in-law lover.

Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.

But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?

Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman should.
Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman, lord.

But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?

Well I only kissed you in the dark,
But your ring it caught on fire,
And I don't know just who I'm facin'
But you've got me burnin' and burnin' and burnin'

[solo]

Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.

[gun shot rings out]
#4January 3rd, 2009 · 03:42 AM
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I have no lyric for you Swordy, just wanted to say that I really like Dusty's idea/vision. It fits the picture perfectly. Though you could re-do this one :
The cattle path
Runs too deep
Uphill both ways
A little too steep
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free

Because its odd, timing and choice of imagery.
#5January 3rd, 2009 · 09:48 AM
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The cattle path represents the everyday routine...uphill bothways a little too steep means that we cannot remove ourselves from the everyday routine.
I will think on it. Perhaps something else will fit better.

Thanks for the comment 
#6January 3rd, 2009 · 05:19 PM
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dang!
okay Dusty i really really really love those lyrics!!!! damn... i am not just saying that either.

DTF i really like the prespective you gave them as well.

if I were to write lyrics to it, it would have the general idea that , it doesnt matter what comes between us i will always love you, type thing...idk this picture is very inspirational, thank you for that brain teaser Mr. Fish! i will think more on this.... i might post something later after i have thought about it awhile.

-Sarah White
#7January 4th, 2009 · 02:38 AM
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Thanks Sarah Nice to hear your comments! I hope you do something up for this as well..You always have a cool perspective.

Kings:
Perhaps something along these lines?

The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me


Hey Swordy!
I'm curious if you came up with something as well. haha

Would be nice to see images like this sometimes...I find I need a bit of a jumpstart sometimes

Adios Amigos!
-Mark
 
#8January 4th, 2009 · 03:54 AM
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dustyskates wrote…
Thanks Sarah Nice to hear your comments! I hope you do something up for this as well..You always have a cool perspective.

Kings:
Perhaps something along these lines?

The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me


Hey Swordy!
I'm curious if you came up with something as well. haha

Would be nice to see images like this sometimes...I find I need a bit of a jumpstart sometimes

Adios Amigos!
-Mark
 :D
Now that is a verse........that is THE verse even! Thats really good, Sands of Time is more universal than cattle grid, it's a bit like 'sheep', difficult to put in a song without it becoming silly.
Yes like this verse a lot.

As for the picture, it's a very clever image, they may be kissing and 'love is blind' but they literally cant see each other, and could be kissing anybody  ??
#9January 4th, 2009 · 08:22 AM
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had some lyrics in german though, guess dont fit
#10January 4th, 2009 · 01:49 PM
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Well not being a lyricist I can only come up with a one liner in shape of a balloon caption:

"They could have cleaned the sheets"
#11January 4th, 2009 · 02:34 PM
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Now you're gone, and it's hotels and whiskey and sad-luck dames
And I don't care if they miss me, I never remember their names
They say if you get far enough away, you'll be on your way back home
Well, I'm at the station, and I can't get on the train

Must be blind love, only kind of love is stone blind love
Blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh it's blind love, stone blind love
It's your stone blind love

Now the street's turning blue, the dogs are barking and the night has come
And there's tears that are falling from your blue eyes now
I wonder where you are and I whisper your name
The only way to find you is if I close my eyes

I'll find you with my blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh your blind love, your stone blind love

It's your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, stone blind love
#12January 4th, 2009 · 02:35 PM
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893 posts
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battlecat wrote…
Now you're gone, and it's hotels and whiskey and sad-luck dames
And I don't care if they miss me, I never remember their names
They say if you get far enough away, you'll be on your way back home
Well, I'm at the station, and I can't get on the train

Must be blind love, only kind of love is stone blind love
Blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh it's blind love, stone blind love
It's your stone blind love

Now the street's turning blue, the dogs are barking and the night has come
And there's tears that are falling from your blue eyes now
I wonder where you are and I whisper your name
The only way to find you is if I close my eyes

I'll find you with my blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh your blind love, your stone blind love

It's your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, stone blind love
oh, by the way, this is a Tom Waits composition  oh, and by the way, you guys have created some truly awesome lyrics (Dustyskates, Kings and DTF). I actually LIKE Kings imagery with the cattle path...(makes ya think). Dustyskates, you really ARE a lyricist! Really powerful!
#13January 4th, 2009 · 05:35 PM
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Lmao dude.

That was my cattle path! 
I think the change was for the better though...Kings was right. The flow wasn't happening.

Thanks for the encouragement Battlecat...But be careful, my head might get too big lol.

Cheers,
-Mark
#14January 5th, 2009 · 01:44 PM
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LOL yes your Cattle Path!

"But be careful, my head might get too big lol."  Oo! Thats OK, there's room for growth I'm sure!! 

But hey! I was just reading the first 'cattle path' bit again and I actually liked the imagery to the second half :
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free
It comes straight from the picture and does not come back in the rest of the poem/lyric, maybe you could still add another verse?

I really hope Swordys going to actually do something with all this !
#15January 5th, 2009 · 02:03 PM
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I will look at that then! lol
Perhaps another verse is in order. Would it be too long though?

Hope to see you guys on chat...I'm off on vacation now and plan to spend some time writing lyrics.
I know I missed Marino about 5 times lol.


Seeeeeeeeeeya!
-Mark
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