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Thought I would give this a go!
These Satin Sheets v2
I'm holding on
It's the edge of night
and I'm holding on
to black and white
Shades of grey
begin to permeate
Steal my senses
Sound and sight
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
Let us make believe
That the world
Just isn't there
That the world
Just cannot see
Inside these walls
We are free
Blind of it all
A world of shadows
And you are the light
These satin sheets
Push back the night
Shades of grey
Have gone away
Of black and white
You have your way
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
-Mark
These Satin Sheets v2
I'm holding on
It's the edge of night
and I'm holding on
to black and white
Shades of grey
begin to permeate
Steal my senses
Sound and sight
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
Let us make believe
That the world
Just isn't there
That the world
Just cannot see
Inside these walls
We are free
Blind of it all
A world of shadows
And you are the light
These satin sheets
Push back the night
Shades of grey
Have gone away
Of black and white
You have your way
And I am blinded
By these satin sheets
Their velvet light
And your body heat
You keep me sane
The night at bay
And from the pain
of day by day
-Mark
Ok so firstly awesome idea, I saw Hellraiser a little while ago so this was sort of motivated by that. For those unfamiliar, Hellraiser features a mysterious woman who lures unassuming men to her attic to be consumed by her demon-spawn, undead, brother-in-law lover.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?
Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman should.
Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman, lord.
But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?
Well I only kissed you in the dark,
But your ring it caught on fire,
And I don't know just who I'm facin'
But you've got me burnin' and burnin' and burnin'
[solo]
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
[gun shot rings out]
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?
Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman should.
Oh she's got me wrapped around her finger now,
Just like every good woman, lord.
But how can I know that he ain't home?
But how can I know that he ain't home?
Well I only kissed you in the dark,
But your ring it caught on fire,
And I don't know just who I'm facin'
But you've got me burnin' and burnin' and burnin'
[solo]
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
Ooh, she's a real good teaser,
Just like every good woman, lord.
[gun shot rings out]
I have no lyric for you Swordy, just wanted to say that I really like Dusty's idea/vision. It fits the picture perfectly. Though you could re-do this one :
The cattle path
Runs too deep
Uphill both ways
A little too steep
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free
Because its odd, timing and choice of imagery.
The cattle path
Runs too deep
Uphill both ways
A little too steep
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free
Because its odd, timing and choice of imagery.
The cattle path represents the everyday routine...uphill bothways a little too steep means that we cannot remove ourselves from the everyday routine.
I will think on it. Perhaps something else will fit better.
Thanks for the comment
I will think on it. Perhaps something else will fit better.
Thanks for the comment
| dang! |
okay Dusty i really really really love those lyrics!!!! damn... i am not just saying that either.
DTF i really like the prespective you gave them as well.
if I were to write lyrics to it, it would have the general idea that , it doesnt matter what comes between us i will always love you, type thing...idk this picture is very inspirational, thank you for that brain teaser Mr. Fish! i will think more on this.... i might post something later after i have thought about it awhile.
-Sarah White
DTF i really like the prespective you gave them as well.
if I were to write lyrics to it, it would have the general idea that , it doesnt matter what comes between us i will always love you, type thing...idk this picture is very inspirational, thank you for that brain teaser Mr. Fish! i will think more on this.... i might post something later after i have thought about it awhile.
-Sarah White
Thanks Sarah 
Nice to hear your comments! I hope you do something up for this as well..You always have a cool perspective.
Kings:
Perhaps something along these lines?
The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me
Hey Swordy!
I'm curious if you came up with something as well. haha
Would be nice to see images like this sometimes...I find I need a bit of a jumpstart sometimes
Adios Amigos!
-Mark
Nice to hear your comments! I hope you do something up for this as well..You always have a cool perspective.Kings:
Perhaps something along these lines?
The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me
Hey Swordy!
I'm curious if you came up with something as well. haha
Would be nice to see images like this sometimes...I find I need a bit of a jumpstart sometimes
Adios Amigos!
-Mark
dustyskates wrote…
Thanks Sarah
Kings:
Perhaps something along these lines?
The sands of time,
Flow much too fast
Not intended
Or made to last
But where I am
You will be
The hourglass
You and me
Hey Swordy!
I'm curious if you came up with something as well. haha
Would be nice to see images like this sometimes...I find I need a bit of a jumpstart sometimes
Adios Amigos!
-Mark
:D
Yes like this verse a lot.
As for the picture, it's a very clever image, they may be kissing and 'love is blind' but they literally cant see each other, and could be kissing anybody ??
had some lyrics in german though, guess dont fit
Now you're gone, and it's hotels and whiskey and sad-luck dames
And I don't care if they miss me, I never remember their names
They say if you get far enough away, you'll be on your way back home
Well, I'm at the station, and I can't get on the train
Must be blind love, only kind of love is stone blind love
Blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh it's blind love, stone blind love
It's your stone blind love
Now the street's turning blue, the dogs are barking and the night has come
And there's tears that are falling from your blue eyes now
I wonder where you are and I whisper your name
The only way to find you is if I close my eyes
I'll find you with my blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh your blind love, your stone blind love
It's your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, stone blind love
And I don't care if they miss me, I never remember their names
They say if you get far enough away, you'll be on your way back home
Well, I'm at the station, and I can't get on the train
Must be blind love, only kind of love is stone blind love
Blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh it's blind love, stone blind love
It's your stone blind love
Now the street's turning blue, the dogs are barking and the night has come
And there's tears that are falling from your blue eyes now
I wonder where you are and I whisper your name
The only way to find you is if I close my eyes
I'll find you with my blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh your blind love, your stone blind love
It's your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, stone blind love
battlecat wrote…
Now you're gone, and it's hotels and whiskey and sad-luck dames
And I don't care if they miss me, I never remember their names
They say if you get far enough away, you'll be on your way back home
Well, I'm at the station, and I can't get on the train
Must be blind love, only kind of love is stone blind love
Blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh it's blind love, stone blind love
It's your stone blind love
Now the street's turning blue, the dogs are barking and the night has come
And there's tears that are falling from your blue eyes now
I wonder where you are and I whisper your name
The only way to find you is if I close my eyes
I'll find you with my blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
The only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, oh your blind love, your stone blind love
It's your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
With your blind love, the only kind of love is stone blind love
Stone blind love, stone blind love
oh, and by the way, you guys have created some truly awesome lyrics (Dustyskates, Kings and DTF). I actually LIKE Kings imagery with the cattle path...(makes ya think). Dustyskates, you really ARE a lyricist! Really powerful!Lmao dude.
That was my cattle path!
I think the change was for the better though...Kings was right. The flow wasn't happening.
Thanks for the encouragement Battlecat...But be careful, my head might get too big lol.
Cheers,
-Mark
That was my cattle path!
I think the change was for the better though...Kings was right. The flow wasn't happening.
Thanks for the encouragement Battlecat...But be careful, my head might get too big lol.
Cheers,
-Mark
LOL yes your Cattle Path!
"But be careful, my head might get too big lol." Oo! Thats OK, there's room for growth I'm sure!!
But hey! I was just reading the first 'cattle path' bit again and I actually liked the imagery to the second half :
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free
It comes straight from the picture and does not come back in the rest of the poem/lyric, maybe you could still add another verse?
I really hope Swordys going to actually do something with all this !
"But be careful, my head might get too big lol." Oo! Thats OK, there's room for growth I'm sure!!
But hey! I was just reading the first 'cattle path' bit again and I actually liked the imagery to the second half :
But when I'm here
My eyes can see
In these sheets
We can be free
It comes straight from the picture and does not come back in the rest of the poem/lyric, maybe you could still add another verse?
I really hope Swordys going to actually do something with all this !
I will look at that then! lol
Perhaps another verse is in order. Would it be too long though?
Hope to see you guys on chat...I'm off on vacation now and plan to spend some time writing lyrics.
I know I missed Marino about 5 times lol.
Seeeeeeeeeeya!
-Mark
Perhaps another verse is in order. Would it be too long though?
Hope to see you guys on chat...I'm off on vacation now and plan to spend some time writing lyrics.
I know I missed Marino about 5 times lol.
Seeeeeeeeeeya!
-Mark
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