#1December 30th, 2008 · 09:50 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
Living in The Clouds
Time slips away,
And everything goes down wrong,
Because my life is everything I detest,
And we all get dragged along

Sunny mornings to moon lit nights,
We live among the clouds,
Out of touch, hear and sight,
But are easily brought back down

So i say exactly what I know,
And hope it turns out right,
Because tonight I'm worn down to the bone,
And wont bother with a fight

Superficial things and human beings,
Are everywhere i turn,
So how can i know what to believe,
Because nobody has a concern

So i say exactly what I know,
And hope it turns out right,
Because tonight I'm worn down to the bone,
And wont bother with a fight

Just tell me what to say and do,
Because spoken words arent always true,
Because when living in the clouds,
Things get twisted and turned around


i'm not going to post for a while on here.

but i would like to say, that this song was written in a short amount of time, and just left in a journal for months. Then one day i got inspired and wrote a story based on it.
#2February 23rd, 2009 · 08:14 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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I want to say that your writing/lyrics/poetry...is really good...right from the heart and real...nice work...do you plan to put music to this?

Flyer
#3March 2nd, 2009 · 07:47 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
thanks
thank you!

the thing is, i didnt write it as music. i just wanted to see if i even COULD write it, but it turned out more like poetry...
but i think i have a friend who can help me with the music if i really want to 
#4March 4th, 2009 · 05:26 AM
22 threads / 13 songs
513 posts
Japan
' i have a friend who can help me with the music if i really want to '

You should try it Bee San
hope you inspirations keep flowing
arigato 4 posting
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