#1December 11th, 2008 · 05:45 PM
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165 posts
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because you don't have me
You'll never have the girl
that gets along with all the guys

You'll never have the girl
thats honest and doesnt lie

You'll never have the girl
that will listen and not get mad

You'll never have the girl
thats nice but likes to be bad

Because you don't have me
You'll never be that guy
that other men envy

Because you don't have me


You'll never find another girl
that loves you for you

You'll never find another girl
that does for you what I can do

You'll never find another girl
that can be your best friend

You'll never find another girl
who woulda stuck with you till the end

Because you don't have me
You'll never be that guy
that other men envy

Because you don't have me


*music interlude*

You'll never be the guy
the other guys wish to be
(Because you dont have me)
You'll never be happy
You'll always feel empty
(Because you dont have me)
You'll always think
Of the way things could be
(Because you dont have me)

because you dont have me
Im finally happy


Because you don't have me
You'll never be that guy
that other men envy

Because you don't have me






*special thanks to Kings for the  "because you dont have me" idea~

i might change it up a bit.... i have a slow rock balad in mind....
let me know what you think!

~Sarah White
 
#2December 12th, 2008 · 02:58 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I thinks it's excellent.....yes because I heard it but also because you wrote it right ! 
 I really love the fact that you just fire in the "You'll never...."s
And even though it has one theme,  'you aint got me' , you still put it /express it coming from different directions with different reasons.
And the mean queen is always on top!

You play piano dont you?
Ever put that knowledge into an audio/music editing program like Fruity Loops?
Maybe you should try.
#3December 12th, 2008 · 05:08 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
kings wrote…
I thinks it's excellent.....yes because I heard it but also because you wrote it right ! 
 I really love the fact that you just fire in the "You'll never...."s
And even though it has one theme,  'you aint got me' , you still put it /express it coming from different directions with different reasons.
And the mean queen is always on top!

You play piano dont you?
Ever put that knowledge into an audio/music editing program like Fruity Loops?
Maybe you should try.

Yes...you must try or at least collaborate, Rock ballad here we come.....

Denis
#4December 13th, 2008 · 06:02 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Denis wrote…
kings wrote…
I thinks it's excellent.....yes because I heard it but also because you wrote it right ! 
 I really love the fact that you just fire in the "You'll never...."s
And even though it has one theme,  'you aint got me' , you still put it /express it coming from different directions with different reasons.
And the mean queen is always on top!

You play piano dont you?
Ever put that knowledge into an audio/music editing program like Fruity Loops?
Maybe you should try.

Yes...you must try or at least collaborate, Rock ballad here we come.....

Denis
D, I didnt want to say the word, because I'm still not there yet with my time and attention, but reading this my mind said one thing....Collaboration.
I'd love to hear how you hear this Sarah, and I also dont know if you can sing. I dont think a male vocal would/could fit this story, but a strong 'ballsy' female vocal would.
Just want to hear what the music sounds like now! 

I have some more / other ideas concerning the lyrics but I first have to hear your idea of the song.
#5December 13th, 2008 · 01:51 PM
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165 posts
United States of America
i dont have the equipment to uplaod songs......

i really really want to u have no friggin idea!!!!

i think i sing okay..im not that good but my vioce can sing this song...

I WISH I COULD PUT  MY MUSIC ON HERE I REALLY DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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