#1December 9th, 2008 · 08:43 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
By Way of Loving You
Ok, so i never get on here anymore. I find myself preoccupied, until the end of time it seems.
So, I wrote a song.
And, please, I'm not saying that its anything special or anything good.
But I'm out of practice. So, here you go...

By Way of Loving You


Sometimes i wonder if it was meant to be
And then you say 'its not you its me'
But what does that mean?

So where did i go wrong?
This silence is to loud,
Just take me away from here,
I'm left alone, in the middle of a empty crowd

Sometimes I'm by myself,
But then i think of you,
And the words inside my head are crystal clear,
And then i know just what to do

So i try and i try,
Just a little bit harder,
And i was getting by,
But eventually everything gets darker

So where did i go wrong?
This silence is to loud,
Just take me away from here,
I'm left alone, in the middle of a empty crowd

I'm standing in a crowd of unfamiliar faces,
Crying out loud,
So where did i go wrong?
By way of loving you....




Feel free to tell me what you think.
Love it, or hate it.
XXX

P.S. I wrote this in about 3 minutes, flat. Not joking.
#2December 10th, 2008 · 03:36 AM
42 posts
United States of America
thats a pretty good song for three minutes.i couldnt write a decent song in 10mins even if i tried.
#3December 11th, 2008 · 09:06 PM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
thanks =)
xxx
#4December 13th, 2008 · 05:59 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Yes very good, you always had a talent, this proves it.
I love it's sharpness and how you twist the lines to close the verse, keeping the rhyme and opening yet another idea.
Yes very good.
#5December 15th, 2008 · 03:33 PM
1 threads
3 posts
United States of America
you wrote that in 3 minutes? wow! I'm impressed!
#6December 17th, 2008 · 01:07 AM
91 threads
73 posts
United States of America
haha thanks.
when i write, it kinda just comes out.
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