I am open to suggestions... it needs some work

This dream feels so real
It's like I cut the air and entered the past
These moments they hurt
Worse than they hurt before

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

The words they are replaying
Over and over again
I can still here you saying
them over and over again

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

Wake me up from this dream
It's hurting me, burning me
The very words are cutting me
Wake me up

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

I'm drowning drowning drowning drowning
I'm drowning drownign drowning drowning
Wake me up