#1December 7th, 2008 · 10:35 AM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
Melt Away
I can hear you laughing but noone's there
You can't break the silence cause noone cares
How can you say you want to save people from me,
then send 'em to the chopping block

Your world's so cold but you're the only one
to blame for it.
Your actions have led you to eternal hatred,
everlasting damnation.
You built a fortress of iceso you can
hate everyone on the outside, to bad you're alone!

I can hear you all around me but
you're just a whisper in the wind.
Do you hate yourself cause noone loves you?
Is that why you do the things you do?
You left me on a bed of ice so
I would freeze to death.
To bad you forgot one thing,
I'm the fire that'll melt you away.

Your world is gone now that noone plays your little game.
Your actions have led you to this, everlasting damnation.
The ocean you drown in is made up off your tears
  Music Fades......

We don't need you nor do We want you.
Do us all a favor and GET OUT OF OUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Let me know what you guys think please
#2December 7th, 2008 · 09:50 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
well
First let me just say, I DONT FEAR YOU REAPER!!!


   ok... now that I have that off my chest...

   really good lyrics here....  Any chance of hearing these put to use??   I would like that very much...

      JimK

 P.S.  could use something to tie it all together though..  perhaps a chorus of some kind...some kind of repeating something.. to make us remember the song...   And want to sing along.. as we bleed in our mosh pit..
#3December 9th, 2008 · 11:18 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Who the fuck are you talking about?

A demon living in your wardrobe ?
Some twisted one sided view of God ?
or your self ? either past future or present.

The end result is eventually something like MJs 'Leave me alone'

I do think it's too much, something to tie it together could be good like Jim said, but then the 'story' would have to be more thought over with less stones being thrown.

For someone who writes from time to time I find this scary :

Your world's so cold but you're the only one
to blame for it.
Your actions have led you to eternal hatred,
everlasting damnation.
You built a fortress of ice so you can
hate everyone on the outside, to bad you're alone!

Life is backwards.......don't hate so much.....because it's you at the end of the corridor!
it's a "Man in the mirror" kind of thing!
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