#1November 10th, 2008 · 09:35 PM
27 threads / 2 songs
179 posts
Canada
One Voice
ONE VOICE

Intro

Vocalist #1   The days are hot and the summer never ends, I'm down under but, but my voice will rise above

Vocalist #2 The politics are loud and the media overwhelms, in the land of the free, but my voice will rise above

Vocalist #3  The traffic sounds fade to the rhythym of dancing, the London nightlife it roars, but my voice will rise above

Chorus
         When I sing I am free,
         The words, they come alive
         When I sing I can see
         The world it comes alive
         My voice will rise above
         My voice will rise above

verse 1       

            The script just doesn't read right
            The moral just don't seem right
            And my mind is numb from do this and do that
            They say, be satisfied with what you got
            And when your dreams just seem like dreams
            Everything is nothing and nothing is as it seems
            And reality, the reality, becomes what you are not
            Just tilt your head, open your heart and show them what you got!


Chorus
         When I sing I am free,
         The words, they come alive
         When I sing I can see
         The world comes alive
         My voice will rise above
         My voice will rise above

               
Verse 2  

                We've burned the script, forgotten the lines
                Some people say we're out of our minds
                But like never before our heads are clear
                And we can see that there's nothing to fear
                We open our eyes and see our dreams are alive
                Burning bright as the London nightlife
                And reality has no limit, politics, religion
                Hope you can stand the heat, cus here we come ready or not!


Chorus
(3 Part Freestyle Melody)
         When I sing I am free,
         The words, they come alive
         When we sing I can see     
         The world comes alive                   
         Our voice will rise above     
          Our voice will rise above 
           Our voice will rise above
           
Outro
Solo            Now three have become one
                No limits to what can be done
                Three voices, three stories
                Three hearts, three destinies
                One song to rise above
#2November 10th, 2008 · 09:40 PM
27 threads / 2 songs
179 posts
Canada
This song is about people from different parts of the world coming together to sing the same song....about learning to ignore the trials and tribulations that surround us...about ignoring land and sea barriers and the miles that separate us to come together and make music like so many people do, such as what happens on the Amp and other venues on the WWW.
It is meant as a three vocalist song, each from different parts of the world.

Thanks for reading!

-Mark
#3November 10th, 2008 · 10:36 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Now this is really interesting what you have in mind. I like the idea you have. I think 3 different vocalist from different parts of the world would work well....I see this as kind of a rap song...at least in my head thats the way i hear it...

Flyer


Nice rating
#4November 15th, 2008 · 03:44 AM
27 threads / 2 songs
179 posts
Canada
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate the comment
#5November 15th, 2008 · 10:49 AM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
"Everything is nothing and nothing is as it seems
            And reality, the reality, becomes what you are not
            Just tilt your head, open your heart and show them what you got!"
I think that this is my favorite lines of the whole song.

Now..

if it were me.... (but its not its you so you can take this suggestion or leave it lol)

I would really bring these lines out because they are the foundation for the second verse. Whether its with the music or the vocalists, i would deffinitly bring them out. And once again IF it were me (but its not its you so you can take this suggestion or leave it lol)
I would build these words up and then make the second chorus  stand out.. again i dont know how you would do that in your own way, but when i was reviewing your song those words, the second chorus, and verse 2 stood out the most, so i would deffintily bring those out!

but like i said IF it were me. Thanks for your comment on Fall Into Me, thought id comment you back!

-Sarah
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