#1November 10th, 2008 · 01:34 AM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
My Brain's on Layaway (just for tonight)
I'm sitting here
typing these little black keys
trying to musically illustrate
so many confusing things
So I've given up tonight
my minds to cloudy to write

I'm just sitting here
trying to write a song
trying to find the words
they always come out wrong
Sometimes i feel like
I'm talking to a wall
speaking of which
i haven't checked
my facebook at all

I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh
I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh


The light from this screen
is making the room glow
I'm way to wired to sleep
tryin to let my creativity flow

So many things to write about
they all run into the same
living a life and making mistakes

So i don't know what to sing about
but this i know is true
i just changed my background color
from pink to green then blue

I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh
I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh


I need to think of  something great
But i feel like my brain's on layaway

I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh
I cant think of a chorus O Oh Ooh Oh



  • um i really don't know what to say, I'm tired, but i wanted to write something SO bad, i actually have a guitar part, its kinda reggae sounding lol, keep in mind it was just for fun!
let me know what you think though!
~Sarah
#2November 10th, 2008 · 03:15 AM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,825 posts
Germany
blue backgrounds are always good

would change the chorus into "just for tonight o oh ooh oh"
#3November 19th, 2008 · 01:53 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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This is pretty cool..I like it


Flyer
#4November 19th, 2008 · 05:30 PM
1 posts
United States of America
XD
It reminds me of a dark room... and then there are stars that illuminate Edward bent dramatically over a grand piano... and then... he plinks one of the black and white keys...and he begins to glow.... Suddenly he looks up directly into your eyes... and his hands are flying down the keyboard, his features illuminated even more....................... And I pee my pants. I love it. So very much. One day you should print off everything on very nice paper and make a gorgeous book. I would buy it. I would pee myself more.
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