#1October 31st, 2008 · 02:04 PM
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I Don't Know
Since when has it been this way?
Since when do we live on hate?
And all I can say, is that I miss yesterday.
Time flows on and on,
Until even time is gone,
And we can truly say, we don't miss yesterday.

Here I am sitting on my cloud in the sky,
Got all these feelings but just don't know why,
When I look at you I can't help but sigh
My head wants to smile but my heart wants to die
Oh but why? I just don't know.

The night starts to glisten with 1000 eyes
I know I can't escape but I might as well try
A broken heart symphony plays in my mind
I won't put up with this for another time
But where will I go? I just don't know.

I'm just another lonley soul on the road
Riding out into the unknown
I've lost all these feelings of being secure
But nothing, no nothing, nothing is ever that pure.

Be gentle =] xx
#2November 1st, 2008 · 08:12 PM
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So has this got a tune?
I like it, it's a little 'mellow dramatic' but would work with the right 'broken heart symphony' behind it.
I find "I won't put up with this for another time" reads strangely, could be your intention   , I'd sooner put something like "I won't put up with this, no..not one more time!"
Have you got more lyrics?
#3November 2nd, 2008 · 10:29 AM
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I think the "won't put up with this" line was mainly because as I was singing it it scanned well. I'm gonna start doing gigs in my local area so I'll try your lyric as well and see what happens.

It does have music yeah, but i'm not sure I'd call it a broken heart sypmhony. It's more sparse, I guess as I was writing it I had a very specific moment of my life in mind. Out of curiosity what did you think it was about?

I have plenty more, this was just the first one I clicked on in my folder. I'll be uploading more soon.
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