#1June 24th, 2008 · 12:14 AM
76 threads / 5 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
Why Do Angels Die?
Why do-angels have to die?
So perfect-so hard to say goodbye.
There's got -to be another way.
For an angel-to stay.

[Chorus]
Oh why-do angels have to die?
They say-there's no cause to cry.
But there is-when an angel dies.

When I had-so many tears.
You were there-to chase the fears.
But now-an angel's gone and died.
So many reasons-to run and hide.

[Chorus x2]
Oh why-do angels have to die?
They say-there's no cause to cry.
But there is-when an angel dies.
Oh why-do angels have to die?
They say-there's no cause to cry.
But there is-when an angel dies.

~So I've a guitar part for this and hope to do some more with it soon.
Anything I could change or fix?
#2June 25th, 2008 · 05:41 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
This could be a beautiful slow melancholy sad song.
I do like it, as for fixing it, it broken ?
I dont quite follow the angle of the story but it seams to be edging on the Peter Pan story that every time you say Fairies dont exist , a Fairy dies.
It's like telling a child thats crying that every time they cry an Angle dies !!!!! scary !! but a beautiful idea !
You've written yet another inspiring poem  !  
#3June 27th, 2008 · 02:43 PM
76 threads / 5 songs
529 posts
Cook Islands
Thanks kings :]
Ha it's sort of about that you could say.
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