#1October 16th, 2007 · 08:18 PM
44 threads / 6 songs
305 posts
United States of America
Remind Me
I see you smile and I know
I want to be with you for a while
No question in my mind
No doubt in my head

Oh, and
Everytime I see you, my heart jumps a bit
And everytime I need something, you seem to be it
I don't think I can describe what you mean to me
I can only hope that I make you happy.

And I know, it's so right
That it's you I want to be with
So much of you has slipped my mind
Until tonight now I want to make it right
Before today I never really saw you, for who you are

You remind me of that other time
When I thought that things would turn out fine
You replace the image passing by
Of a life filled with wasting time
Your my summer in the winter

Oh, and
Everytime I see you, my heart jumps a bit
And everytime I need something, you seem to be it
I don't think I can describe what you mean to me
I can only hope that I make you happy.

Oh, and
Everytime I see you, my heart jumps a bit
And everytime I need something, you seem to be it
I don't think I can describe what you mean to me
I can only hope that I make you happy.
#2October 17th, 2007 · 04:10 AM
115 threads / 18 songs
1,414 posts
United States of America
it's rather general... though-- i like the 4th stanza, about replacing the image passing by, and the summer in the winter time

nothing wrong with the lyrics, really.. i just feel that they are all put into a single moment of time, and so they feel narrow, if that makes sense.  there's not a lot of developement.  the only escape we have here is the line about her replacing the image of a life filled with wasting time, which can help the careful reader/listener to fill in some pre-story by himself.

do you have plans to put this to music, or is it just an idea in the works?  perhaps some music would help shed some light on this work!

thanks for posting!  most people avoid this section, as it tends to be rather difficult to post good lyrics that everybody understands.  without music, the lyrics of *any* song can seem dull.

one thing's for sure-- it's a tougher crowd here in the lyrics forum 

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