#1May 29th, 2008 · 12:48 AM
40 threads
165 posts
United States of America
Broke Through Me
taking you for granted
every single day

its only when you're gone
that i wish you could stay

never appreciated your love
until it was gone

every single fight when i was
right i wish i was wrong

laying down in the darkness
wishing i could dream of you
realizing you're gone breaks my heart in two
knowing its for the best
makes my tears burn
i waited til you were gone
til i finally learned

every kiss we shared
lingers in my memory

remembering all the late nights together
slowly kills me

the happiness that used to be
suffocates me now

i try to forget about you
but i just dont know how


there is no getting over
the fact that i let you go

i am just now expressing
the feelings i never showed

i am sorry i never let you see
the soft side of me
always fighting to be strong
and never to be wrong
you broke through me
and made me weak
and that i could never let you see
you held me up
when i just wanted to fall

i just couldnt let you know
that you were my all


you broke through me....
#2May 29th, 2008 · 09:12 AM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
Hmm     it made me cry man!!!
     I am not quite a big fan of the meter you used but...
           over all its a good song
  you convied the idea that you miss this girl/guy very well
      you did good progressing along through out the song
and over all its a good song!!!
#3June 1st, 2008 · 11:58 PM
23 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
United States of America
wow i know u write the same way i do so whatever happened im sorry
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