About letting go and holding on kind of thing.....

Sometimes when I let go
I find my self
Looking at her, looking for her, in her face

Sometimes when I let go
I find her
Looking for me, looking to me, in the night

Sometimes when I let go
I find it in her eyes
And the moment that we know
There are no more lies

Sometimes when I let go
I am there
Where I’m meant to be 
And so is she

Sometimes when I let go
I’m draped around her
Like a cape around her
She can’t escape
I’ve bound her
With my vision of the truth

Sometimes when I let go
I take her hand
I take her down
Again her soul makes that sound
That heaven only knows

Sometimes when I let go
I just can’t let her go
Sometimes when I let go
I just can’t let her go
Sometimes when I let go
I just can’t let her go

I really like the simplicity of these words and the overall impact of the tone...
Put to some enduring music and heartfelt vocals, they could really pack a punch...
Good stuff...

/ yea i agree.... maybe start the track off with alittle ambience noise and then alittle acoustic guitar maybe.... kinnd of an "All the Things I Hate (revolve around me)" by BFMV type thing..... if you have to decide on between the ones you have written in the past week and you could only turn one into music I WOULD SAY CHOOSE THIS ONE!!!    


btw: BFMV stands for Bullet For My Valentine

Guys, thanks for the reviews.
OK so I have to choose this one ! Cheers, It needs a re-write though. It's just a bunch of ideas put to words at the moment, and the idea of 'Sometimes I let go' can be woven into more poetical scenarios.
When I find the enduring music the structure will come.