#1May 24th, 2008 · 01:31 AM
15 threads
63 posts
United States of America
The City Sleeps in Flames
I spent days
fighting your battles with no sleep
and as I do recall
you said that you'd weep
on my grave if I fall
but you want fall at all
the city sleeps in flames

         ** Chorus**
You look to me with open arms
remembering all the good times we had
and how you just turned away
the city sleeps in flames

**verse 2**
what object of faith
would lead you to believe
that this was the right way
and as I look on and burning buildings fall
I see that you were wrong
the city sleeps in flames

** chorus**

** break**
as fire rains down from heaven above
you look to god wishing for love
but he just turned away
the city sleeps in flames

**chorus**




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hey guys this song just kinda spilled out a few nights ago!! Tell me what you think ( and is the second verse ok? ) thanks in advance!!!!!!!!!!
#2May 24th, 2008 · 03:45 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
I like!
It's simple, it dances delightfully around the same subject from beginning to end, it's written in a way that more people can relate to it in different ways in that it's direct and clear yet 'general' and open.
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