I know I haven't posted anything in quite awhile,but here it goes :]

Loneliness has stripped love of it's pride
But within this brand new tide
We've been dying and drowning
But none of us have been frowning
You've never felt more alive
Into the ocean we dive

[chorus]
I can feel it in my bones when the storm is close
All we need is a stronger dose
But we're ripped and torn away
And thrown into a watery grave

We hope for a blue sky
But blue is just a happy lie
Into the murky abyss we depart
Our end is just the start
We wait for the waves and the wind to blow
Eyes closed tight,our ears open for the boat

[chorus]
I can feel it in my bones when the storm is close
All we need is a stronger dose
But we're ripped and torn away
And thrown into a watery grave

We all need a boat.

I like weird music! This reminded me of Modest Mouse's new CD "We were dead before the boat even sank". This is really good. Are you indie... or no? even if you aren't it looks indie and it looks really good.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its so amazing!
i can picture this song with a really simple acustic tune
(think kimmy dawson,, aka juno soundtrack)
and i LOVEEEEE it
^w^
i didnt realize how talented with words u were
good job meow!

hubris: yes I am Indie :]
and love that cd!!!

pap: Thanks :] (Juno soundtrack=amazzzzing)
Hoping to get some guitar soon... as soon as I get an acoustic :3


thank you!

Funny in'it ? How some people have just got it!   
To be honest I dont find it very rhythmical and I think it's poetically untidy !
So it must be your intrinsic energy.....as long as you write it then it's OK!
You know I could sit here for hours rearranging this gem of yours, because it's just like you , running around in circles trying to find the right button !! 
But it still is IT all the way through.
So do you have a tune in mind and does it fit ?

It's inspirational! I could go off on a totally new song from ;
We hope for a blue sky
But blue is just a happy lie