Hey I just made a little something here, also please comment or criticizes it. It is my first song ever.  and yo, it's not much but I'm just starting.. 
soo here you go

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W3jfSVRnpDY

0:45-1:00 sounds like it belongs in a car commercial (I always get hooked onto songs like that)!

Sounds great for your first song, especially on FL!

I'm pretty sure myself and some other members would like to review your music on BandAMP though. Did you know that you can upload your music onto here instead?

Looking forward to hearing some of your future uploads.

    --XFactor--

EDIT: To upload a new song, find the blue tabs at the top - the first one from the left should read "My Home". Click it, and find the link to your username... Look down a bit lower and you'll find "Songs: 0". Click the number, and then it should be pretty straightforward from there.

Im glad someone like my song haha.. I had a lot of help... I will upload the song as soon as possible, I just need to add a few more mins on it maybe add a few boom boom paw paw and yo any suggestion maybe?

Some Gated Strings might sound good.....or a Metallic Fly-By sample.
Any effects really that will 'fill it in' a little and give it more of a story.

So have you sussed out the difference between the pattern and the clip tracks?
When you going to upload your song here then?