#1December 28th, 2022 · 05:21 PM
28 threads / 28 songs
95 posts
United States of America
Beautiful World
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This song is not in a battle


I wrote this during the pandemic. I know it doesn't always seem like it but it really is a BW

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#2December 29th, 2022 · 11:26 AM
92 threads / 12 songs
906 posts
United States of America
Beautiful! Majestic! Amazing assemblage of melodies, textures, rhythms and chordal elements; however, there is so much going on (the doubled guitars, background strings, effects on the guitars) that competes for attention that the total impact is compromised a bit.  I would suggest reducing the volume of some of these elements in order to let the awesomeness of the melodies and the lead instrument to shine through...but an incredible piece of work nontheless.
#3December 29th, 2022 · 12:07 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Yes it's still a beautiful world. Battlecat has some good suggestions in this well worked piece.
I sense it would be a great movie track, especially at the dynamic change and building up from there.
#4January 28th, 2023 · 12:16 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Must agree it is a bit busy all in all, but a lovely clear sound.
I feel more attention to the drum track  is what it might deserve, slightly 'mechanical' and plain compared to the electrifying guitars.
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