vocals and lyrics,  edited vocals and did a bit of EQ to clean things up just slightly.

Much better mix on this version. Nice to see some uploads on the AMP.
It's got great potential, love the vibe.
The frequencies are clashing on the instruments and too much reverb makes it sound muddy. The only thing that cut through well was the bass drum. If the instrumentals were remixed your vox would be more pronounced.
Well done!!

This is why I come back her!

Cool stuff Goat. The heavy use of reverb gives it an aetherical vibe, but to make that really shine you should go all out on it (as in how Clannad does that kind of thing). It will be a challenge to prevent muddiness, indeed.

Wow Its great to come back and talk to friends
Hi Greg...
So hope you and yours all doing well
So about this track .......
long time since I listened to you in any capacity...

must admit a bit surprised with this outing...

Sounds like an adventure into reverb plugins!!!
You have a voice that can kill at 200 yards ...... where is it?!!!
And I agree with previous the "band" is muddy.

Its a very good song .... but the aetherial vibe puppet refers to is on overkill here.

I want to hear the "you" .... your voice ... its magic!!! and awesome!!!

Question...? are you slightly out of your comfort "range" like the song starts high?

Your vocals can rip the heart from any mortal!!

Not this time....

Is this you with a new band .... or solo

Great to hear you again

BTW This is not negative review ... I Love it

Wantingtobereducedtotears   Fish

so ive gone back a few years

and seen u had a vocal problem 2-3 years ago

how did that resolve

friend fish

so forgive me last review  please

it was what i saw

blasted FISH

I like this...I like the whole song idea,would mess around a little more with some frequency changes just to fit in the pocket, Love the harmonies and the vocal performance. Bravo!