#1October 11th, 2018 · 04:30 PM
8 threads / 4 songs
21 posts
United Kingdom
Wonder
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A short instrument with a melody I came up with and a solo that starts off promising and peters out a bit in the latter half. I may improve on it in the future. But for now, this is just a taster of the current state of Sole Brick.

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#2November 25th, 2018 · 05:17 PM
158 threads / 13 songs
2,307 posts
United Kingdom
Quality
Your recording sounds like its behind a wall....

Fish

how are you recording?

Transferring to MP3 ?

Music is Great

but track (not the music) sounds dreadful
Fish
#3November 28th, 2018 · 10:25 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,801 posts
Germany
The main chorus line is bit boring after 12 bars, esp. after 2 minutes. And I am still waiting that my ears will be rescued, since you are playing everything in the 4th with the same guitar sound.
So... I would....
...leave the line as it is, but...
...make a verse that brings you back to the 1st to open up for story to tell
...choose another guitar sound for a melody.

This track has no story, no beginning, no action, no happy-end.
But it's up to you to make a complete song out of it.
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