#1October 11th, 2018 · 04:30 PM
8 threads / 4 songs
21 posts
United Kingdom
Wonder
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It’s in the battle 2018-11


A short instrument with a melody I came up with and a solo that starts off promising and peters out a bit in the latter half. I may improve on it in the future. But for now, this is just a taster of the current state of Sole Brick.

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#2November 25th, 2018 · 05:17 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
Quality
Your recording sounds like its behind a wall....

Fish

how are you recording?

Transferring to MP3 ?

Music is Great

but track (not the music) sounds dreadful
Fish
#3November 28th, 2018 · 10:25 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,803 posts
Germany
The main chorus line is bit boring after 12 bars, esp. after 2 minutes. And I am still waiting that my ears will be rescued, since you are playing everything in the 4th with the same guitar sound.
So... I would....
...leave the line as it is, but...
...make a verse that brings you back to the 1st to open up for story to tell
...choose another guitar sound for a melody.

This track has no story, no beginning, no action, no happy-end.
But it's up to you to make a complete song out of it.
#4January 3rd, 2019 · 07:35 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
920 posts
Netherlands
Yes it needs work, but there are ideas to work with. So its all about the work you put into it.
I liked most of the guitar parts, bur it gets a bit repetitive and off now and then, not to say boring, especially with the simple drum beat..
So get to work mate!
I like it though.
#5January 8th, 2019 · 06:15 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
Oh My God!
No uploads
#6March 24th, 2019 · 04:31 AM
8 threads / 4 songs
21 posts
United Kingdom
re: Quality
swordfish wrote…
Your recording sounds like its behind a wall....

Fish

how are you recording?

Transferring to MP3 ?

Music is Great

but track (not the music) sounds dreadful
Fish

Thanks Fish.

The thing is I'm not hearing the "behind a wall" sound. It must be my headphones or what I used to. I'm using Presonus Artist DAW.

I must admit though, I'm nowhere near knowing exactly how to get the best out of it. I really need to do a course in sound production. I've started with some videos from Presonus specifically for this software and I'll looking at Recording Revolution which has a lot of good stuff.

Glad you liked the music. More work to do....

Scott
#7March 24th, 2019 · 04:32 AM
8 threads / 4 songs
21 posts
United Kingdom
re: Oh My God!

Er... is this good or bad??

Scott
#8March 24th, 2019 · 04:34 AM
8 threads / 4 songs
21 posts
United Kingdom
MaxdB wrote…
Yes it needs work, but there are ideas to work with. So its all about the work you put into it.
I liked most of the guitar parts, bur it gets a bit repetitive and off now and then, not to say boring, especially with the simple drum beat..
So get to work mate!
I like it though. :D

Thanks MaxDB!

I know what you mean about the repetition. This really was something that I knocked together rather quickly. I just liked the melody.

I only use prerecorded drum tracks as I haven't worked out how to create to my own yet with my DAW. Still a lot of work to do to get my sound anywhere near how i want it...

But glad you liked it.

Scott
#9April 7th, 2019 · 06:19 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
Wonder
I dont yet see a kind of uncompressed version
Fish

my god this must all sound so negative ...

sorry

record another track and see if it turns out with similar

fish
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