Everyday 2017 |
Everyday
Written & Composed by
M. Mahfouz/ Myzzym
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3QPQeXOxit4 {Live rehearsal}
Band's main website:
https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido
Written & Composed by
M. Mahfouz/ Myzzym
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3QPQeXOxit4 {Live rehearsal}
Band's main website:
https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido
Thanks for sharing your composition.
I like the tone of the lead guitar.
It needs a lot work before you can call it your best attempt. The golden rule in composing music is 'LESS IS MORE'. In this instance means less melodic notes, much much less reverb.
The structure needs looking at. Try the standard:
Intro, Verse, Chorus, Verse, Bridge, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Outro
Fade outs are the easy way to end a song, be creative and come up with a grand ending.
I hope my critique will help you develop into an aspiring songwritter.
I like the tone of the lead guitar.
It needs a lot work before you can call it your best attempt. The golden rule in composing music is 'LESS IS MORE'. In this instance means less melodic notes, much much less reverb.
The structure needs looking at. Try the standard:
Intro, Verse, Chorus, Verse, Bridge, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Outro
Fade outs are the easy way to end a song, be creative and come up with a grand ending.
I hope my critique will help you develop into an aspiring songwritter.
Hey :) long time |
Thank you Denis,
All your criticism is for the best,
Thank you for giving me the time to listen to my demos
and please visit https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido
for more of my new demo Aainwelived 2017/ 2018
only 3 intrumentals
My ode to the night
How long
Everyday
All your criticism is for the best,
Thank you for giving me the time to listen to my demos
and please visit https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido
for more of my new demo Aainwelived 2017/ 2018
only 3 intrumentals
My ode to the night
How long
Everyday
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