#1February 11th, 2018 · 04:50 PM
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Egypt
Everyday 2017
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It’s in the battle 2018-03


Everyday
Written & Composed by
M. Mahfouz/ Myzzym


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3QPQeXOxit4  {Live rehearsal}

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#2February 12th, 2018 · 03:04 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
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United Kingdom
Thanks for sharing your composition.

I like the tone of the lead guitar.

It needs a lot work before you can call it your best attempt.  The golden rule in composing music is 'LESS IS MORE'.  In this instance means less melodic notes, much much less reverb. 

The structure needs looking at. Try the standard:
Intro, Verse, Chorus, Verse, Bridge, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Outro

Fade outs are the easy way to end a song, be creative and come up with a grand ending.

I hope my critique will help you develop into an aspiring songwritter.
#3February 12th, 2018 · 04:37 PM
9 threads / 9 songs
28 posts
Egypt
Hey :) long time
Thank you Denis,

All your criticism is for the best,


Thank you for giving me the time to listen to my demos


and please visit https://www.reverbnation.com/foxido

for more of my new demo Aainwelived 2017/ 2018

only 3 intrumentals
My ode to the night
How long
Everyday
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