#1August 23rd, 2017 · 06:50 AM
116 threads / 53 songs
3,056 posts
Long Shot

This song is not in a battle

In a fit of inspiration, I recently recorded a few songs, and this was the finale of that batch.


firing shots into the unkown
already lost inside a dead zone
no walls at all to run into
no prayers and thoughts that can reach you
a realm of fading memory
like slipping away under the sea
with a side of anxiety

forever life under construction
poised to rake the interaction
and the fallen cried to reroll dice
but it all went down with the other lies
and none to witness the sacrifice...

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#2August 23rd, 2017 · 06:56 PM
124 threads / 30 songs
1,407 posts
United States of America
Powerful and dirty all the way to the end!  The high bit hits a good button for me, probably reminds me of old the Linkin Park sound.  I like getting the last minute and change for enjoying the rolling sound of it all.  Great work!
#3August 25th, 2017 · 06:34 PM
208 threads / 64 songs
2,287 posts
United Kingdom
Long Shot
Genre ...
Not my cup of tea...


I hear the lyric ... super well done

Thank You

#4August 28th, 2017 · 05:36 AM
116 threads / 53 songs
3,056 posts
Thanks guys! It means a lot!

Over the past couple of years I really got my (major) production issues out of the way. Good hardware and software and plug-ins are one thing but most was gained on the "soft" side of things. Applied a lot of "Keep it Simple, Stupid!" and "Kill Your Darlings" both during recording and mixing process.

Should get the next batch of songs going...
#5August 29th, 2017 · 09:17 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
Production sounds pretty pumping on this, nice work.
#6Today · 05:26 AM
155 threads / 29 songs
1,942 posts
United States of America
excellent. Man I love this one. Great playing vocals, timing, everything actually.  You've got some low low end in there that my sub is getting out there just feels a bit weak compared to the mids.  It's probably just my system  and room though.  Your skill are top notch. It's got lots of energy and it keeps it coming.  The vocals sound big and real.  I'd buy this.

 I just upgraded my analog gear (mostly vocal chain) it really helped to get into some gear that I don't have to do anything to it to get it to sound good.
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