#1July 26th, 2017 · 04:12 PM
37 threads / 36 songs
122 posts
Netherlands
Beautiful Liar
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I guess this song speaks for itself. Just a raw recording. It's about a beautiful and destructive woman who ripped my heart out. Thanks for listening

Lyrics:

There you are again   
Oh beautiful liar
Hold on to me
Cause I'm all you desire

Never let go
I'm all that you have
Oh you need me so
Cause there's no one else left

I pick up the phone
But nobody's calling
You'll be here soon
At least that's what I'm saying to myself
   
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

You're vomiting light
I'm swallowing darkness
I'm counting to five
Caterpillars eating up my mind

I hold you I choke you I love you I hate you
I break you I mend you I fuck you I crave you

You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

Needless to say
I'm so tired of loving you
But I say it anyways
Cause I'm tired of this silence in my room

Sometimes words
Speak louder than actions
For what did I gain
By emptying your needles in my veins

Oh you're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
Oh you're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

Drink yourself to death
Oh beautiful liar
And hold on to me
Cause I'm all you desire

This is goodbye
You beautiful liar
This is goodbye
You beautiful liar

Cause you mean nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
No, you mean nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

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#2July 28th, 2017 · 02:19 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,355 posts
United Kingdom
Great story and great feel in your vox.

The melody needs work,  it's a little too repetitive. You could try changing the chords, or play the same chords a different position to vary the sound.

Nice job
#3July 29th, 2017 · 03:28 PM
208 threads / 64 songs
2,289 posts
United Kingdom
re: Beautiful Liar
RazoR wrote…
I guess this song speaks for itself. Just a raw recording. It's about a beautiful and destructive woman who ripped my heart out. Thanks for listening

Lyrics:

There you are again   
Oh beautiful liar
Hold on to me
Cause I'm all you desire

Never let go
I'm all that you have
Oh you need me so
Cause there's no one else left

I pick up the phone
But nobody's calling
You'll be here soon
At least that's what I'm saying to myself
   
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

You're vomiting light
I'm swallowing darkness
I'm counting to five
Caterpillars eating up my mind

I hold you I choke you I love you I hate you
I break you I mend you I fuck you I crave you

You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
You're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

Needless to say
I'm so tired of loving you
But I say it anyways
Cause I'm tired of this silence in my room

Sometimes words
Speak louder than actions
For what did I gain
By emptying your needles in my veins

Oh you're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
Oh you're nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

Drink yourself to death
Oh beautiful liar
And hold on to me
Cause I'm all you desire

This is goodbye
You beautiful liar
This is goodbye
You beautiful liar

Cause you mean nothing to me
Nothing to me at all
No, you mean nothing to me
Nothing to me at all

Yep I kind of go with Dennis on the treatment so far
Once again great lyrics ...

As it was a once past the piano recording its cool .... maybe take it further?

like-a-fish
#4July 31st, 2017 · 06:50 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
919 posts
Netherlands
Its really lovely!
But it could use some developement.., a change, a lead, some complimenting instruments,
maybe even a complete band...?
Just my opinion.
Great work so far. Now take it to the next level?
#5August 2nd, 2017 · 12:04 AM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,948 posts
United States of America
I love it. Lyrics are very deep, dark, and lovely at the same time.  Nice main melody line. Your vocals are perfect for this style. as mentioned before there is a few things that might be done to spruce it up, I think it's damn fine like it is.
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