The new song.  I need to tighten them up playing wise. This is not a mix, just raw VSTI tracks.  I have a few guitar parts I need to record, and a couple of other add on tracks. Then on to the vocals. I might get this done in time. I go for a week vacation the first of June.

The composition feels great!  Nice kicking up of the drums, and the ending is definitely going to sound nice with everything coming together.

Thanks, I've still got a few bad notes in this to fix, and I need to finish up the bass line through the middle 8 break.  I must have been more tired than I thought, to let the last 2 snare hits play.

Love how this sounds so far! Hope your vacation is smooth, look forward to the rest of this track.

The structure is very impressive.  Great work on the drums, that must have taken some time to edit.
The only thing I would say is the Bass Guitar needs filling out in some parts to keep the rhythm flowing.
Look forward to hearing how it sounds in the next chapter.

Thanks.