So here is that random electronic thing with vocals now! Yay!

I like the music, the vox are cool, I normally don't like a lot of "radio" effect on vox but, on this song imho,  might work better than a full eq on the vox.. Roll off everything on the low end vox up to about 600hz, add a tiny bit of distortion. It could really bring the vox into the song mix. ...just my opinion though.

Interesting piece! I want to suggest give some sounds more atmosphere with some simple vst modulators. You added a lot of verb instead now to make it more spacey, try some modulation?
Or don't, its a deep atmosphere anyway.
   

Nice to see you getting creative - sounds quite dark and eerie, keeps your ears wanting to know what is going to happen next.
Try uping the mids overall to give it more presence and clarity.