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I love how it develops from synth sounds to 'set free' guitar noodles at the end. Awesome playing! Great instrumental piece, probably would even do great with vox!!

Nice groove. Sounds like this might have been an exploratory piece (noodle?) The overall sound is a little muddy (no pun intended  ). Drum sound and bass sound seem to steal some frequencies. I might suggest working with various instrument sounds and the EQ and see what happens. This has possibilities...

There's a lot of noodle on this but you might get somewhere if you put some order... unless you don't want to. I liked the guitar tones but I'm not sure about the whole mixing, levels and panning here.

         > Iz

You've got the ideas there - it has some originality - some 70s influences mixed in with 90s, which are nice. You just need to feel where the changes go and for how long, plus vary the drums to suit the changes - try to start it without any drums, see how it sounds.
I won't go on about the production quality, but we're here if you want any guidance on improving it.
Keep working on it.

The compression on the snare sounds a bit to tight...but a very fluid composition...Would love to hear the low level solo more centered and the main clean gt moved on to the opposite side of the drums for mix balance and maybe even contrast...this of course is a subjective opinion and just based on what I hear in my head. Great job!

Reminiscent of The Cure, lovely sounds and groove. Is it a work in progress or good enough as it is?
So do you your self use the instruments you've been developing?
Good to see you have the time to be creative with your own music too.

KGB, an initialism for Komitet gosudarstvennoy bezopasnosti
(Russian: Комите́т госуда́рственной безопа́сности (КГБ);

Clean secure noodle ... I like

not a song yet......

john --- swordfish