Taking your constructive criticism into account, more harmonies have been added etc. Thank-you for your feedback, let me know what you think!

Well, I think taking criticism into account really worked here. This sounds great!
If I were really picky, I think the bass is louder in this mix. One or two db less and you are set to go!
Cheers!

           > Iz

Nice - harmonies make it.
I quite like the Bass actually, it supports your delicate vocal.
I think this ones done - you can if you like, keep tweaking the mix, but there is only so much you can do to improve any mix - At the end of the day it's all about the song and your performance is the utmost import of a recording, so if you feel you have done your best, it's a keeper.
Well done!