#1August 3rd, 2015 · 01:59 AM
31 threads / 20 songs
94 posts
Canada
Flowers
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This song is not in a battle


Hi

Been a while, bandamp. Fiance gone out of the country for a month or two, so suddenly lot's of time to be writing songs about misery

Hope you enjoy.

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#2August 4th, 2015 · 04:38 PM
208 threads / 64 songs
2,289 posts
United Kingdom
re: Flowers
DjSkygrinder wrote…
Hi

Been a while, bandamp. Fiance gone out of the country for a month or two, so suddenly lot's of time to be writing songs about misery

Hope you enjoy.

well this is interesting!!!

You sound ANGRY!!!  

maybe don't play this to your Fiance out of the country to display how much u missing her???

bitter fish
#3August 5th, 2015 · 02:34 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,354 posts
United Kingdom
The vox are great, but I'd have preferred it to go with some grunge or distorted guitar and rock drums.
I'm assuming this not about your Fiance?
It's bit short, needs a bridge to break it up.
Keep working on it.
#4August 8th, 2015 · 12:15 PM
22 threads / 1 songs
64 posts
United States of America
Flowers
Cool vocals. The guitar in the intro reminded me of Stone Temple Pilots.
A grunge sound would have made this even better with a distorted electric guitar.
I agree with Dennis a bridge (change up) properly placed would have worked well
Angry lyrics.

Nice job overall I am going to check out your lyrics if they were posted.
Kudos Man
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