This is an old recording of a song that most everyone requests when I perform. Hope you all like it!

I liked it man.  Your voice sounds great, you haven't yet reached your potential with that song though. 

If I were you, I'd touch up on the lyrics, make the voice a bit stronger, and make the recording a band arrangement.  Maybe take it down a half step and then sing it an octave higher during the last two choruses if you can. 

The song really does sound awesome, there's so much you can do with it.  If you have any inclination to hear some suggestions, my email is robmartin6@gmail.com

Good luck and good job man.

Rob

yep! a smart but great voice. there is so much potential in it. do something with it. the melody sounds a bit weak over five tones. missing dynamic, but all in all well done.

Great song, if a little lacking in variety. You have a good voice, I'd love to hear it with the production job it deserves.

you've got a good voice sound but it sounds pretty monotonous, a little more range could be gold

yes good voice i liked your nice clean guitar sound (strum on)

I like the acoustic stuff nice voice

Put this up against a 'Jars Of Clay' song and I cant tell the difference.  Pretty good.

It's not easy to just play ac guitar and sing and it come out good.. you're doing a pretty good job ..with a little work this could be top shelf stuff....