An instrumental Bluesy Jazz

Groovy!I like it...

hmm  I'm not really sure whether this ... Keyboard is the Instrument for that song.... Maybe you should get somenone on a guitar and some real drums and record it again

you should really get yourself some vst plugin's instead of these terrible midi sounds.
The music sounds like it has been plotted in and not played. It gives and electric feeling which I don't think is your intention. If that's not the case, be careful about quantizing too much.

to me it sounds like a phone ringtone. You need some real instruments, and the vst plugins. Then it would sound better.

Try this live, and without so much of the keyboards. Get rid of the midis too, they really hamper the feel of this song. I've always used FPC for songs like this, it might be the best for you also. Also, try muting the horns and adding some reverb or fast dist to them to make them sound a little realistic. Otherwise, very good.

good idea , but midi really sounds too artificial , i'll upload something like this...but only 2 M1 traks. let us ear your song played by instruments , i'll do the same.
good work anyway

its nice but a bit busy.................all the time.........could sit on a deep bass groove and chill
splash i vote

the fish

I say, it's good, the music and composition itself.
It does sound a bit like a musicbox, which isn't very bluesy.
The idea and structure is bluesy but the production is not.
I still like it.