OK, the best song you ever heard!
It is done in Fruity Loops and it has live guitar.
Please comment.

A bit boring... the same thing over and over again. Try putting in some theme's... different chords every once in a while. Some vocals might be nice as well.

Could do with some vocals. I suggest you add some more thing onto it.

Its repetitive im afraid. You also have some ugly digital clipping that has crept in there. Use the fruity compressor and/or Soft Clipper!

An interesting variety of sounds tho, including interesting use of the arpeggiator.

I look forward to hearing more from you!

PS. To keep the levels in check you also really need to use some of the plugins supplied with FruityLoops in the mastering section of the FL mixer. You can use the fruity compressor/softclipper, a parametric EQ, whatever - just to tighten up the mix.

Thank you all guys for help.
I'll try using EQ.
But I'm not so sure about vocals, becouse I don't have good mycrophone.
I have plenty of songs to contribute and I will continue.
Thanks again.