#1June 20th, 2013 · 05:27 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
The Real You

This song is not in a battle

Thought I'd post an old one while me and the band are working on some new stuff! I came across this one just now while browsing through my old YouTube videos... it's probably the most raw emotional song I've wrote, it's really personal. The girl it's about was someone I liked who helped me out after my ex cheated on me. She kinda led me on. I don't think she even knows it's about her haha.

Here's the video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vVgIHUmVaB0

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#2June 21st, 2013 · 11:54 AM
29 threads / 23 songs
197 posts
United States of America
I really really like your vocals on this track!  I'd say you totally re-record this with the band and you got a hit!
#3June 22nd, 2013 · 11:09 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,375 posts
United Kingdom
Often difficult to replicate raw emotion, but you can do it be reliving the moment over and over again until you feel the same emotion.
It's a bit long as it stands, but as UndercoverApple suggested, you can vary the music with your band.
Great potential if you can support the emotion with an arrangement to match.
#4June 24th, 2013 · 04:50 PM
5 threads / 4 songs
34 posts
United States of America
Very cool. Very soulful performance. The track could do with a re-record with the band as was suggested by others but the foundation is clearly there and I wouldn't be surprised if it turned out to be a quite powerful ballad. Nice job.
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