A country RnB'ish Type Hope you like Feel free to give feed back please

Voice tags by

kings

Nice to hear you trying out different styles.
I like the feel to this.
Have you thought about a vocal - I sense a female urban voice would go really nice.
kings has character as always
NICE WORK

I sound flat and stuck in one note.
I really like the directions your taking with your music, this one is beautifully chilled
Maybe you should ask me to record some samples to specific pieces of music, I could get the right feel of it for you, as compared to flat samples.

I feel like some instruments are lacking a bit of reverb, and it feels like they are a little separated from the rest of the track. Namely the high hats. The vocals also need to sound more alive (like Kings said) I would also suggest sending the track to him, so he can better make vocals to the track. I have found it produces much better sounding and more usable vocals.

This is the most musically and best constructed work by you, CP.l
Images of travelling scenes, landscapes, dusty roads etc are coming into my mind.

How already mentioned , King´s voice is a bit too far back. Bring him a bit more upfront (vol....comp).

U.L.I.

ok i remastered the track.  Took Kings out of it so i could get him to do voice tags for this specific track.  but i really would like to do a colabo with someone maybe denis or even ULI i would love to get Marino or  Lisa but cant contact eaiter of them.. if you're instrested please pm me...

there are.. one 4 bar intro

two 16 bar verses

two 8 bar refrains

two 2 bar breaks

and an 8 bar outro

Miracles ....
No ......

Life music ..... Great collaboration ....
I get feeling u looped Kings voice .......not wrong!!! using it as a link to development  ....
man this is nice

second time around is enough though

the song stands up without being too repeated

fish fish fish .. how many times u want to hear my name????

MAYBE U Ready to take a creative leap????



creating a NEXT verse section to your creation .... assuming this is a CHORUS..

Think about it???

You've created a really nice  CHORUS here...we can all sing along
So whats next???... from you??? ....
A VERSE PLEASE!!!....
A Contrasting bit of music .
A bit of story ... whats going on in life...man u have it all
tell me a story in your music ...
u have proved u can make amazing sounds ...
So please tell me an amazing story!!!

sorry Im just trying to pop a creative button to get your songs past just one idea looping

Try this structure

this chorus ... link it to a short story  using the same beats then come back to this chorus.

I am a music teacher as u know .... but i don't want to tell u what to do ...haha

Swordfish tryin to move u!!!

BTW ive listened to this about 16+ times ... i consider myself an expert ....haha ...yep it needs a verse!!!

haha

Bye Fish

Very mellow!  May I say that what stood out the most to me were the little finger snaps in the percussion   What VST or sample are you using for those vocal OoooOoohhhhs?

the snaps are from the dirty south drum kit from www.fruittuts.com and the "OooooOooohhhh" is an electric guitar sample.  the with a reverb on the master track.

Really want some "proper" vocals on this one. I kind of like it, but do need some vocal melody to give it something more.
Quality wise, this is a good recoding with a nice feel.