Written about a woman I befriended in Vancouver, who worked as a prostitute.

I really like your vocals and lyrics!  Just wish the volume was a bit louder

Guitar sounds sweet, nice laid back vocal.
If you need help mixing the track let us know
As Undercoverapple mentioned,  the volume is very low, easy fix by 'normalising' the track in your Digital work Station', then finally  adding a limiter. Would also preferred the vox a bit louder,. As a suggestion you could build some harmonies as the song progresses, but it still holds its ground.

Thanks folks. I'm using a handheld tascam field recorder, and still working out the bugs, so no tracks or alternate takes for me yet. Thanks for the advice though. Eventually ill record this properly.

There are some free download DAW's which you can record into or even use for mastering Like Audacity
http://audacity.sourceforge.net/

Thanks guys, I've figured out thet trouble with my recorder, everything from now on will be at a decent volume.

I tried Audacity, and didn't care for it, I'm a simple man when you get down to the brass tacks.

Love your voice, guitar is nice too.
Everything is right ..... except the VOLUME, sorry had to shout, you may have busted speakers !
Glad to hear you sussed out the recording levels.