#1March 7th, 2013 · 10:30 AM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,932 posts
Canada
Map on the Wall - demo
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This song is not in a battle


Wrote this entire thing last night at 1am, recorded a demo at 2am with everyone asleep which is why I'm extra whispery

Tonight you lay in your pretty bed
Tonight you lay with your pretty head
and you asked me
oh you asked me something

Looking at your map on the wall
Looking and pointing at your map on the wall
can we go to
can we go to Isafjordhur

Looking there at your map on the wall
Peering and gazing at your map on the wall
and you tell me
yeah you tell me there's only one sentence

Laughing and smiling at your map on the wall
Touching and feeling your map on the wall
can we go to
can we go to Isafjordhur

'Cause there's a glimmer in your eyes I see
When you see the possibilities
of everywhere that we could ever be
and we fly like little paper airplanes over the sea

and every night I wish could last forever
just you and me

Tonight you lay in your queen size
Tonight you lay with your pretty eyes
and you tell me
yeah you tell me a secret

Looking at your map on the wall
Thinking and planning at your map on the wall
can we go to
can we go to Isafjordhur

'Cause there's a glimmer in your eyes I see
When you see the possibilities
We glide like paper boats across a lake
And to celebrate we eat ice cream cake

as if we need a reason why for our
great canadian maple syrup heist

Looking at your map on the wall
Looking at your map on the wall
I adore you, I adore you
I adore you

Looking at your map on the wall
Looking at your map on the wall
I adore you, I adore you
I adore you

Every night I wish could last forever
I'd never have to say goodbye
But now I know its never goodbye
It's just a short breath until the next time

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#2March 7th, 2013 · 04:07 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Hmm... It's Ok to start with, but because you were restricted to the volume you can't express yourself out.
So how about you start like this, then in the second verse raise the key and let it all out
Please re-record it and give it a try
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