#1March 5th, 2013 · 06:03 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
20 posts
United States of America
That One Cold Year
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This song is not in a battle


An experimental indie song that I've been up for two day making.  I think it's almost done. what do you think?? 
god I'm so loopy right now.   neeed sleeeeep. 
Anyway, be sure and check it out to the end, (or just skip to the last minute) for this song has a whole buncha surprises!
Enjoy!

-Plex Tonic

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#2March 7th, 2013 · 03:49 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
No disrespect to your vocals, but there is a female vocalist on the AMP named 'Porcelindoll' (my spelling may be out - I'll edit later if it's wrong) - her voice would go really well with your music IMO
I like your creative approach to creating music, yeah creative - Made me smile
Edit
http://porcelaindoll.bandamp.com/
#3March 7th, 2013 · 03:57 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,932 posts
Canada
Dude right after your vocals came in I instantly thought this was "Ramona Falls" or possibly "Menomena". Have you ever heard those groups? This is a SUPER similar style you are breaking through here. I really like your voice and think it works really well with this music (because it reminds me of Ramona Falls) though I can't remember what porcelaindoll's voice sounds like.

all in all this is really cool dude all the changes and surprises is fantastic I love how much it changes!!! That's so, so good and for me, its hard to do. It gives it that refreshing feel and its so cool that you were able to get those sort of time changes in it.

great job
#4March 13th, 2013 · 11:28 AM
27 threads / 26 songs
83 posts
Russia
Nice voice, though not always precise
#5April 25th, 2013 · 08:54 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
15 posts
Canada
Kind of all over the place, but dripping with huge amounts of cool.
#6June 28th, 2013 · 01:31 PM
5 threads / 4 songs
34 posts
United States of America
Wonderfully creative song. Lots of different sound and styles working together. Never a dull moment especially the big finish.
Your vocals at the end really go into a Sex Pistols vibe I really like. I'd love to hear you tackle some aggressive punk tracks.
Pretty cool.
#7June 28th, 2013 · 05:58 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: That One Cold Year
PlexTonic wrote…
An experimental indie song that I've been up for two day making.  I think it's almost done. what do you think?? 
god I'm so loopy right now.   neeed sleeeeep. 
Anyway, be sure and check it out to the end, (or just skip to the last minute) for this song has a whole buncha surprises!
Enjoy!

-Plex Tonic
so as i hear it...review
FIRST LISTEN

nice start intro......intro a bit long
over a minute... get to the table faster ....

then vocs ... i like ....pianos a bit mashed....it sounds out of tune and jangly i assume thats what what u want ... ok then tempo changes

SECOND LISTEN

nice start  but its a bit long before vocal starts
then the voc is a bit off the mike .... or mixed at the back
yep the voc needs throwing to the front more
tuning is a bit off ..... but the message is good
maybe think about crafting the song a bit more
its got hooks in it that are missed ...repeat some of the vocal hooks
 it is a great song that could be awesome if u looked at the structure a bit more!!!

do not be afraid of repeating yourself .....

lego-fish
#8July 3rd, 2013 · 05:00 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Ha, that intro sounds like a "singing saw". Crazy. 
Love the transitions, changing structures, varying moods........... Colourful performance.

While listening I imagine scenes of "absurd theater", cabaret, cirque du soleil, surrealistic pics from S.Dali etc



Very unusual, special, individual.

U.L.I.
#9July 5th, 2013 · 04:30 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: That One Cold Year
PlexTonic wrote…
An experimental indie song that I've been up for two day making.  I think it's almost done. what do you think?? 
god I'm so loopy right now.   neeed sleeeeep. 
Anyway, be sure and check it out to the end, (or just skip to the last minute) for this song has a whole buncha surprises!
Enjoy!

-Plex Tonic

now this sounds crazy .... but its now july !!!!

and your intro to this song and its shape has stuck in my head all that time

must be doing something right

haha

fish
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