Alrighty, first go with my vocals. They are a wee bit processed but hey, it fits the style. This track was all about experimenting with my voice, and new melodies.

The very first build (0:00-0:06) was constructed all from scratch, and about 60 effects.
The intro tones (the one that sound like your phone is too close to your speaker) is all hold-and-sample work from my vocals.

Vocals:
The Mutation of fate
is upon you now
and if you look away
it will pass you by

So don't think twice
and never look back
for in this moment
you can change your  life

Forever.

I get the vision of a TV modern game show.
Interesting creative work. Your voice has sense of authority.
I'd work on the mix, many of the layers clash in having similar frequency range, thus not creating any separation in mix. The drums in particular sound thin.

Yes drums are thin ... need more bollocks
The rest has bollocks ... loads of, very powerful stuff.
Shit this would be amazing at a BIG venue with LOADS of people getting TOTALLY off on it !
If you now got into mastering the sounds and channels you have.
Denis is a genius you know, it needs more separation and clarity.
What software do you work with ?

Very cool song. Great production values. Well recorded, well composed, impressive performance, programming and lyrics. Well done.

KINGS hit it head on, in a huge venue this would drive me crazy!  That glitchy gated synth sounds amazing!  I think a Gabba/distorted kick and a sub bass kick will really add the "bollocks" Kings is looking for hahaha!

Your voice is perfect for this stuff!

Eier! Eier! Wir brauchen Eier! (Oliver Kahn)   
Bollocks! Bollocks!  We need bollocks!

I agree to the previous comments about the lack of bass(drum).
This style NEEDS a very low fundament. Kickdrum must feel like a liver hook, a body punch.
So, give it some balls........................edit an (ass-)kickdrum.......................

U.L.I.

EXPERIMENTER

RESPECT..

FISH